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Who Dares.

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Fay Slimm
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Who Dares.

Postby Fay Slimm » Fri Nov 28, 2014 8:03 am

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Hushed and hydrated,
Water-wet otters,
Timorous creatures,
Dissension dislike.
Hostile approaches,
Raising reactions.
Daring offensives
Unnerving the pike.
Opposing behaviour
Self-will underpins.
Courage in warfare
Means he who dares
................ wins!
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Stella
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Re: Who Dares.

Postby Stella » Fri Nov 28, 2014 4:06 pm

He looks pretty determined to me, and hunger is a driving force...
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Noodlehead1997
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Re: Who Dares.

Postby Noodlehead1997 » Sat Nov 29, 2014 3:13 pm

This was so good. I liked it, good imagery -- the little fella looks hungry for sure!
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Tom Balch
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Re: Who Dares.

Postby Tom Balch » Sat Nov 29, 2014 6:15 pm

Ha-ha! An otter on a mission, great imagery as always, Fay.
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