Puddle Dreams

[Cindy]

The rain came down
It felt like rivers

Puddles with ocean dreams
Quivered with delight

Ahhh, thwarted again
The clouds moved on

Only the trees kept raining
A drizzle too far

Reflections languished
...not one ripple.

[stevenstirk]

A delight to read. 'Puddles that want to be oceans'. It's what
originality is all about .

[Fay Slimm]

What a wonderful thought - - "Puddles with ocean dreams" - - such a unique conception Cindy - lovely flow to this read.

[Karin Anderson]

Such creative imagery and 'puddles with ocean dreams quivered with delight really' did it for me'. I will look at puddles with a different viewpoint now Cindy.

[Stella]

i love the heavy rain when runs like a river along the roads , and puddles can quite magical as they swirl with the flow.. they might well be "oceans of dreams"..

[Tom Balch]

A very clever and well thought out piece, Cindy.

[denysruak]

Puddle is such a lovely word. I remember as a child I would stand on the edge of puddles and get the feeling of falling into their depths, almost as if I was falling into the ocean so this enchanting write evokes special memories. Hey Puddle! You are an ocean to me! Thanks for this dream, Cindy.

[Nightmute]

Such nice imagery, Cindy...and the rain can be so cleansing and bring a beautiful scent to the air, Ma'am.