2015 - Tender Blessings  And Dream

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Seema Chowdhury
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2015 - Tender Blessings  And Dream

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Sun Jan 18, 2015 5:55 pm

Our home is a place full of blessings and love
It feels like a joy ride to heaven above

Where we are writing our own fairy tale
And composing our song to hum and hail

The love of the family is the greatest gift of all
That fills our lives with smiles big and small

Where peace and serenity prevails at every sight
And bring back beautiful memories all bright

It's a place where new dreams are born everyday
And we happily embrace this magical time and stay

With care, passion, gratefulness and lots of love
To decorate our world like heaven above

Where we  hope and pray that we can create a life
With blessings, humbleness and purity that survive

And give ourselves another chance today
To spread care of love to brighten our way

So we can gather tender blessings and dream
To build our home with joy and laughter's beam.

****Written on the 3rd Anniversary of my home****

Seema Chowdhury
January 16, 2015
Last edited by Seema Chowdhury on Sat Feb 07, 2015 10:13 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Cindy
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Re: 2015 - Tender Blessings  And Dream

Postby Cindy » Mon Jan 19, 2015 2:59 am

Sounds like a beautiful place to live. This is a very lovely poem.

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Stella
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Re: 2015 - Tender Blessings  And Dream

Postby Stella » Mon Jan 19, 2015 2:44 pm

Your home sounds delightful....

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Re: 2015 - Tender Blessings  And Dream

Postby Fay Slimm » Mon Jan 19, 2015 10:21 pm

A lovely tribute to a peaceful home and very well crafted - a pleasure to read Seema.

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Re: 2015 - Tender Blessings  And Dream

Postby Karin Anderson » Tue Jan 20, 2015 11:13 am

A home is a haven for our heart and what a splendid write for the 3rd Anniversary of your home. May you have many more happy years in your blessed home Seema.

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Tom Balch
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Re: 2015 - Tender Blessings  And Dream

Postby Tom Balch » Thu Jan 22, 2015 1:41 pm

Beautifully written, Seema. The end couplet sums up the piece perfectly.

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Re: 2015 - Tender Blessings  And Dream

Postby Nishu » Thu Jan 22, 2015 3:52 pm

A beautiful poem, that's how homes should be.

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Sandra Martyres
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Re: 2015 - Tender Blessings  And Dream

Postby Sandra Martyres » Wed Jan 28, 2015 8:30 am

A beautiful tribute to your home Seema...I love the use of couplets too!

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Re: 2015 - Tender Blessings  And Dream

Postby Joseph Anderson » Mon Feb 02, 2015 11:08 pm

Tender,heartfelt,touching and extremely well penned. A very joyful upglifting poem.Really liked itl


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