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The Yellow Rose ~ a double triolet
Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2015 11:14 pm
by Stella
So pretty you are sitting there
sweet rosebud in your yellow dress;
no other flower could compare.
So pretty you are, sitting there
with your petals outspread so fair,
you've won my heart i must confess.
So pretty, you are sitting there
sweet rosebud in your yellow dress.
For friendship is the yellow rose
a thoughtful gift to say you care,
and gently in the garden grows.
For friendship, is the garden rose
a secret sign for she that knows
he has a loving heart to share?
For friendship is, the yellow rose;
a thoughtful gift to say you care
© Stella Armour 25-06-2015
Re: The Yellow Rose ~ a double triolet
Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2015 12:28 am
by Nightmute
What a gorgeously beautiful write this is, Stella. I especially adore the second stanza...it really speaks to my heart, Ma'am. Most excellent writing, indeed!
Re: The Yellow Rose ~ a double triolet
Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2015 1:24 pm
by Karin Anderson
This is a glorious writing, with a stunning yellow rose to accompany this impeccably crafted double triolet. I love everything about it and appreciate the turn you have made in the second stanza. I will be dreaming of beautiful yellow roses tonight thank you Stella.
Re: The Yellow Rose ~ a double triolet
Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2015 6:21 pm
by Prashant Shaurya
A secret sign for she that knows
he has a loving heart to share..
Wow! what lines! This is such a finely crafted poem.
Re: The Yellow Rose ~ a double triolet
Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2015 9:40 pm
by SyberRose
This is exquisite Stella...soft and beautiful as always...Rose:)
Re: The Yellow Rose ~ a double triolet
Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2015 9:46 am
by Tom Balch
Beautiful words to go with the beautiful picture, Stella. As SR said...Exquisite.
Re: The Yellow Rose ~ a double triolet
Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2015 12:50 pm
by Sandra Martyres
The perfect triolet so beautifully crafted with a lovely picture to go with it.
Re: The Yellow Rose ~ a double triolet
Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2015 2:38 pm
by Seema Chowdhury
Such an inspiring and a lovely write