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Fallen Star

Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2015 10:22 pm
by Noodlehead1997
The stars in the sky continue to shine
But they never come in contact
Yet, we all gaze at them with love
Each night they make a comeback. 

Are they trying to show us
How to make it on our own 
Go forth and twinkle like a star
And then like them go home. 

But does that star get lonely 
Does it sit and wait like me 
For the company of others 
That I seek but never see. 

So, I sparkle at the party
See me shining at the dance
It's so lonely in this crowded room 
Give a fallen star a chance.

Re: Fallen Star

Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2015 4:23 pm
by SyberRose
Hi Sye...so good to see you and read you again...Loved it as always...love the perspective of the inner voice...
well conceived...hope all is well with you...Rose:)

Re: Fallen Star

Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2015 7:38 pm
by Cindy
This is so lovely. Beautifully rhymed.

Re: Fallen Star

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2015 9:53 am
by Stella
It can be lonely in a crowded room, but your star will outshine all the others one day.. just you wait and see Sye.

it is lovely to see you back and with a beautiful poem to share :) :) :)