Take Me Away

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Prashant Shaurya
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Take Me Away

Postby Prashant Shaurya » Sat Mar 21, 2015 4:58 pm

I lit a lamp last night
Filled it to the brim
Gazed at it for long
While musing deep

Its light made way
Through my dense heart
In relief I forgot
To fill it again

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Stella
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Re: Take Me Away

Postby Stella » Sat Mar 21, 2015 7:08 pm

It was wonderful that you had no need to fill it again Prashant...a single light can be used in a very meditative way..

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stevenstirk
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Re: Take Me Away

Postby stevenstirk » Sun Mar 22, 2015 9:14 am

A lovely poem. Says a lot in so few lines

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Re: Take Me Away

Postby Nightmute » Mon Mar 23, 2015 9:43 pm

Mesmerized to such a degree by the light that the narrator, perhaps, neglected to refill the lamp, Prashant? Or, as Stella notes, there was no need to refill the lamp for the purpose of it was fulfilled in one filling. Very nicely done, my friend.

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Re: Take Me Away

Postby Cindy » Tue Mar 24, 2015 1:30 am

A wonderful little poem. :-)

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Re: Take Me Away

Postby Karin Anderson » Wed Mar 25, 2015 9:04 am

Candle light can be so soothing and relaxing with the light can bring peace after a hard day's work. I am sure you will fill the lamp whenever you need to and thank you for sharing Prashant.

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Re: Take Me Away

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Sat Mar 28, 2015 12:56 pm

Nice


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