Waves and Whisky Quatern

[Prashant Shaurya]

The waves whispered into my ears
Lyrical notes of songs unknown
Which, mingled with the whisky fumes
To feed, my senses on those tunes

When the seaside lass held my gaze
The waves whispered into my ears
‘Bout how the breeze played with her hair
And how the moon couldn’t help, but stare.

While whisky saved its magic spell
For stories, only time would tell
The waves whispered into my ears
To warn me that love could bring tears.

The playful breeze still brought her scent
Albeit the sun shower made her dance
Enchanted by my April muse
The waves whispered into my ears.

Prashant Shaurya ©
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[Stella]

This is beautiful Prashant, and i enjoyed how the first lovely line was repeated in each verse until the round was complete and true to the form

Welcome to my site and do hope you will be happy here..

[stevenstirk]

a clever and well written piece. Particularly enjoyed the flow.

[Karin Anderson]

Welcome to Stella's site and I hope you will enjoy it as much as I do. Your Quatern poem is a treat to read and refrain works wonderfully as it travels down your page. It is such a beautiful, lyrical and enchanting write, and thank you for posting it Prashant.

[Cindy]

I like this. It is a clever piece and very beautiful.

[Joseph Anderson]

Welcome-Some of the best poetry I have seen on various poetry sites have come from your fair and mystic land.I would include this among them.
Unusual,unique rhyming patterns, with repetitions works very well.A very enjoyable read. Please continue

[Tom Balch]

A well crafted and lovely piece, much enjoyed.