Reflections ~ tri-fall poem

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Stella
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Reflections ~ tri-fall poem

Postby Stella » Sat Mar 14, 2015 4:45 pm

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A reflection of you
each season
beautifully paints in my heart,
a springtime sky of blue
my reason
for fresh and kind thoughts to impart.

Summer and autumn days
embrace me
like long lazy hours in the sun,
laughing in all the ways
we could see
at the magical life we spun.

The cold of winter stings
I don’t mind,
I see your footsteps in new snow
following angel wings
and i find
reflections of you grow and grow.



© Stella Armour 14-03-15

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Prashant Shaurya
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Re: Reflections ~ tri-fall poem

Postby Prashant Shaurya » Sat Mar 14, 2015 8:29 pm

I just love this composition Stella.. It indeed spins magic in the heart of the reader..

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Re: Reflections ~ tri-fall poem

Postby stevenstirk » Sat Mar 14, 2015 9:23 pm

A delight in the reading. I have not followed this form before and you have pulled it off superbly.

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Re: Reflections ~ tri-fall poem

Postby Karin Anderson » Sun Mar 15, 2015 5:58 am

The tri-fall form is one of my favorite forms and like Prashant comments, it can spin magic to the reader as you have succeeded in doing. I love how you have used all the seasons with such beautiful imagery Stella.

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Re: Reflections ~ tri-fall poem

Postby Cindy » Sun Mar 15, 2015 11:44 am

Very beautiful. It's a very interesting style or form.


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