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Spring Morning Mine
Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 12:09 pm
by Tom Balch
Fields of golden buttercups
grasses wild and green,
the almond trees in blossom
a splendid springtime scene.
The olive groves lush and green
skies so clear and blue,
swallows showing off their skills
home from their long adieu.
Wild Rosemary and Lavender
the golden gorse’s shine,
as I wonder through this
springtime morn....
this springtime morn of mine.
Re: Spring Morning Mine
Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 12:44 pm
by Stella
How beautiful Tom, and what a lovely springtime image you have painted with fresh colours and the vitality of the swallows
dipping and swooping in the sky.
The closing couplet is just divine...thank you for this welcome write....
Re: Spring Morning Mine
Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 6:27 pm
by Joseph Anderson
Tom-a precious reminder of what is on the way,done in fine style.After fighting through two feet of late snow here in America I am more then
ready.A cheering read.
Re: Spring Morning Mine
Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 6:30 pm
by Fay Slimm
Oh this is so beautifully rendered Tom - a real pleasure to read. Spring is the best of months to see wonderful new happenings.
Re: Spring Morning Mine
Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2015 11:49 am
by Karin Anderson
Such a delightful and beautiful spring write and I love how it flows. I can imagine it being the lyrics of a song Tom.
Re: Spring Morning Mine
Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2015 8:35 pm
by Prashant Shaurya
This is such a refreshing poem. I enjoyed reading and rereading it..
Re: Spring Morning Mine
Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2015 9:19 pm
by stevenstirk
A really beautiful piece Tom. Very much enjoyed
