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SUN...haiku
Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2015 11:08 am
by Stella
#1
orange sun melted
silk golden sheets spread themselves
over ocean beds
#2
late red setting sun
slow melts over the ocean
scarlet shadows bleed
#3
red flames of sunset
absorbed into twilight tide
crimson waves kiss shore
#4
sun blazes its fire
thunder rages in red sky
cool raindrops refresh
© Stella Armour 2010
Re: SUN...haiku
Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2015 11:43 am
by Fay Slimm
Wonderfully powerful these haiku-tributes to the glorious sun Stella. Thanks too for the stunning picture.
Re: SUN...haiku
Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2015 12:06 pm
by Karin Anderson
Such a marvelous suite of haiku where each haiku could stand alone Stella I agree with Fay, as together they are powerful and my favorite is the concluding one with the comparison of fire and thunder to the cool raindrops.
Re: SUN...haiku
Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2015 2:21 pm
by Tom Balch
A wonderful Haiku sequence, Stella and what a lovely picture to go with your words.
Re: SUN...haiku
Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2015 10:20 am
by ken.brandli
Always love your colourful works, Stella. They bring a sense of vision that is rare indeed.
Re: SUN...haiku
Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2015 10:40 pm
by Seema Chowdhury
Wow, superb!!!
Re: SUN...haiku
Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2015 11:04 am
by Cindy
Love your haiku's. Beautiful words and picture.