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Fantasy
Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2015 10:55 pm
by Stella
Fantasy
If you were the lovely moon
that I admire from afar
I could come and sit beside you
and be your favourite star
I would shine like a diamond
a beacon to your glow,
we could light up the heavens
wherever we would go
You could rock me in your cradle
and soft lull me to sleep
ask the angels to protect us
and pray our souls to keep
When the dawn of morning came
we could disappear from view,
find another world to light
from the love between us two
The night skies would adore us
for being the friends we are
if you were the lovely moon
and I your favourite star
© Stella Armour 2012-08-11
Re: Fantasy
Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2015 11:18 pm
by Sandra Martyres
Fantasy at its poetic best...loved this sweet poem Stella.. Good to see you posting again. I hope you are feeling better and well on the way to a complete recovery. Love Sandra
Re: Fantasy
Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2015 12:27 am
by Fay Slimm
Welcome back to posting again dear Stella and best wishes for a complete recovery from the surgery on your hand - - the fantasy poem is simply delightful.
Re: Fantasy
Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2015 10:34 am
by Karin Anderson
A glorious romantic fantasy and as your name Stella is a star you do shine like a diamond and complement the moon beautifully. It is a lovely surprise to find you posting again Stella and I hope each day your hand improves more and more....
Re: Fantasy
Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2015 12:25 pm
by Cindy
Oh, I love this. It's written so beautifully. I enjoyed the rhythm of it too.
Re: Fantasy
Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2015 3:38 pm
by Joseph Anderson
Thanh you Stella for this beautiful,ethereal piece of poetry.Great thought, presentation and wonderful rhyme, which I adore. This is as heaven sent-
love it
Re: Fantasy
Posted: Tue Mar 03, 2015 3:12 pm
by Seema Chowdhury
Wow, it's beautiful Stella, really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
Re: Fantasy
Posted: Tue Mar 03, 2015 7:38 pm
by Nightmute
Friendship and love definitely found within this softly exquisite verse, Stella. How lovely it is to think on being away from the world while being accompanied by a loved one, Ma'am.