Postby antoine » Sat Feb 21, 2015 10:15 pm
this settles the reader into a wee daydream devoid of any drama - just a beautiful image then the twist - I was going to myself what kind of flowers are screeching - is this about the Day of the Triffids or something equally outlandish until it settled again with the realisation, like the branches of the tree, the way they bounce when birds launch from them then settle down....
cool haiku -