Blowing Kisses (a senryu)
Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2015 7:51 pm
Were a tune a kiss
I’d play you a symphony
on the evening breeze
~
Were a tune a kiss
I’d play you a symphony
on the evening breeze
~
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Blowing Kisses (a senryu)
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Were a tune a kiss
I’d play you a symphony
on the evening breeze
~
Re: Blowing Kisses (a senryu)
Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2015 10:20 pm
Nice! How lovely this is, Stella, and the feeling of bliss and joy you convey is utterly fantastic, Ma'am.
Re: Blowing Kisses (a senryu)
Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2015 10:59 pm
A beautiful Senryu for Valentine's Day Stella - - and I love the picture you chose to go with it.
Re: Blowing Kisses (a senryu)
Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2015 11:44 am
Gorgeous Stella! I love the sense switching concept and romance of the first two lines and then the unexpected but very clever melding of romance and nature in the last line. Can almost hear the music floating on the breeze. And then there is the lovely, and very apt image... Very well done.
Re: Blowing Kisses (a senryu)
Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2015 4:02 am
A gorgeous presentation for Valentine's Day. The picture with red rose petals and the violin, sets your theme off wonderfully Stella.
Re: Blowing Kisses (a senryu)
Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2015 3:23 pm
Stella-oft times the greatest beauty comes in the smallest package. This is definitely a full carat.Sweet memories for me, in this rare gem
Re: Blowing Kisses (a senryu)
Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2015 7:14 pm
The perfect Valentine's Day senryu!
Re: Blowing Kisses (a senryu)
Posted: Mon Feb 16, 2015 11:28 pm
I love this!
Re: Blowing Kisses (a senryu)
Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2015 6:04 pm
Beautiful
Re: Blowing Kisses (a senryu)
Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2015 7:25 pm
A whole symphony of kisses. That would be divine. No sharps or flats just full of the top notes of love.
Great senryu Stella
Great senryu Stella
Re: Blowing Kisses (a senryu)
Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2015 7:25 pm
A whole symphony of kisses. That would be divine. No sharps or flats just full of the top notes of love.
Great senryu Stella
Great senryu Stella
Re: Blowing Kisses (a senryu)
Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2015 2:09 pm
Stella, Stella, Stella, thank you for this beautiful sweet poem that you have penned perfectly.
Re: Blowing Kisses (a senryu)
Posted: Sat Feb 21, 2015 2:42 am
Seamless - delightful! 