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Yaks (alliterative Aruaku)

Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2015 8:34 pm
by denysruak
Yaks (alliterative Aruaku)

Youthful, yeasty yaks'
yakety-yak yielded yawns -
from yesteryear yaks.

(C) Denys Ruak 2014
All rights reserved.

Re: Yaks (alliterative Aruaku)

Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2015 11:44 pm
by Cindy
Can you say that three times real fast? Lol

Re: Yaks (alliterative Aruaku)

Posted: Fri Jan 16, 2015 5:00 am
by Karin Anderson
I could see there is more to this than first meets the eye, so I sticky beaked and checked it out on the internet and used both eyes. So I now know it is cleverly crafted, especially using the word "yak". I don't want to yak on too much but I love the inventiveness of the form and humor too Denys!

Re: Yaks (alliterative Aruaku)

Posted: Fri Jan 16, 2015 10:04 am
by Stella
Lots of fun Denys.. i enjoyed your own form,

Re: Yaks (alliterative Aruaku)

Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2015 1:53 pm
by Tom Balch
Ha-ha! Well done, great fun.