Absence (A Mirror Oddquain)

[Karin Anderson]

(Photo Garden Child by cutiepie06 flickr)


Child

your absence

blow-dries Spring's fragrance.

Ice dew from china petals

cracks~



Home

dew melts, melds warm rose essence

buds burst everywhere

garden-sprite

child~


Karin Anderson © 2014

[Fay Slimm]

A dream of a read Karin dear friend - your garden child poem shines with delightful lines - - pure sweet-smelling vision of magic. Thank you for sharing it.

[Sandra Martyres]

You have conquered a rather difficult form in this beautifully crafted poem Karin.

[Stella]

How wonderfully you have put these lines together Karin, the absent child brings sadness but then the mirror reflects springtime and there she is in the garden...

A difficult form to use but you have turned his poem into a wonderful mirrored imaged....

[Adette]

How delightful this poem it speaks volumes in so few words and the picture image is just so cute
the beauty and tranquility of a child is quite breathtaking - loved it