Black Mascara Tears

[Noodlehead1997]

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Who knew, I would cry for you
You swept me off my feet,
And stole my heart.

Who knew, I would die for you
You made up fantasises
Lied about our future.

Who knew I would mourn you
After the lies where just stories.

Who knew, my eyes would cry
Black Mascara Tears

[Sandra Martyres]

A touching write... Liked the black mascara tears

[Stella]

Wonderful closing couplet Sye, and great picture too...

[Cindy]

So very sad, but wonderfully written.

[Fay Slimm]

I feel every line in this well-crafted verse of regret for lost trust when love hurts enough to produce mascara -tears. An exceptional piece Sye and thank you for sharing it.

[Joseph Anderson]

You write extremely well for such a young age.This was so sad and poignant.You got it said with great brevity and said so well

[Tom Balch]

The sadness in this well penned piece shines in every line, NH.