Clouds (and boys) pass by
palm tree shadows waving, as
my daughter sunbathes
Passing by (Haiku)
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Stella
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Re: Passing by (Haiku)
A lovely summer image Ken, just right to brighten a dreary January day in England... 
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ken.brandli
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Ta. Stinking hot down here in Australia. I am visiting family in Townsville (in the tropics).....whew, thank heavens for air conditioning.
Re: Passing by (Haiku)
A lovely haiku Ken - great first line which breathes its young sunlit scene over a top-coat wintery day here.
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ken.brandli
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Re: Passing by (Haiku)
Thanks Fay. A fun thing to write.
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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: Passing by (Haiku)
A fun write
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