Daughters Dance

[zephyrwords]

Daughters dance like daisy's do,
laugh like lilies, yes it's true.
Smile like sunshine's yellow grin,
bubble boisterous, never grim.
Run like airy summer rain,
rippling like a glad refrain.
Daughter's dance the whole day through.

[Cindy]

Adorable. Love the poem.

[Stella]

Yes, you found the right place Colleen well done

a lovely rhyming alliterisen poem i just love the opening line and i will put the format in our "How to understand poetic forms " under the "How to Guides " section.

[ShelleyA]

Hi Colleen. A well crafted rhyming Alliterisen. Good imagery and descriptives. Nice use of simile. Lovely depth of feeling. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Well penned and an enjoyable read.

[LorettaYoung]

Nice Imagery and alliteration Colleen and a very enchanting picture. Well done. Best Loretta

[zephyrwords]

Thank you all for your wonderful comments!! ..and what a thrill to have one of my poems used as an example for understanding poetic forms!! I'm honored, Stella!